Correction of 1st 30% written exam essay

Why we need to know what celebrities do?

In our country where we can see all types of journalist is important to know if they are doing a good job or they just want to be in someone’s life. Should the journalist care about problems of celebrities like politics?

First of all, in one case recently in USA the vice-president of McCain Sara Palin have many problems with the media because they want to know about her daughter pregnancy why they care? Is not their problem? Some people are against of why they pay attention to them if is their life we don’t have to care about them, also if the made a mistake in the past is not our problem.

Second of all, some people are in favor in paying attention to them just because we can know more about how is going to be elected and also can give us an idea of how they live and they behaviors.

Taking everything into account is important to know how are going to be our mandates but we don’t have to be involve in their life’s in my opinion is better if you know what they are going to do fur us but not their private life’s.